Critique of my poem, No Salvage, by Tracy Koretsky of www.winningwriters.com

I have to pinch myself on this one - I love this critique.
You can read it by clicking on the link for Winning Writers - Poetry under "Favorite Sites" (on the left side of the first page of this blog.)  Also, feel free to check out Tracy's own work under the link, Even Before My Own Name (4th from the top).